Sheldon-Lloyd · Sheldon-Lloyd · Dec 29, 2018 · Jan 9, 2019 · Jan 9, 2019 · Jan 9, 2019
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+# Page 1
+## Panel 1  (full page width 2/3rd height)
+*The stadium/hub in which a match between Xenos and Kyshumu is being fought in is shown from above*
+
++Commentator: ReNet is in the lead but Even with only seconds left in this match it is still to close to call
+
+## Panel 2 (1/3rd height and width)
+
+*The focus is on Max as he cups his hands to his mouth cheering for Xenos as he sits on his fathers shoulders*
+
+Mack: Come on Max lets cheer him on
+
+[Max(yelling)](#Max): Come on Xenos!
+
+Mack: Come on Xenos!
+
+
+## Panel 3 (1/3rd height 2/3rd width)
+*A half body shot of the front of Xenos and the back of his opponent is shown*
+
++ Commentator: Can Xenos complete what would be a historic comeback to lead his team to victory
+
+
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+# Page 10
+
+## Panel 1 (wide panel shot 1/3rd vertical full width)
+A full front shot of Max is shown standing in the empty lobby looking to the right
+
+Max is the first one there and waits in the lobby to get his first Cyber.Beast
+
+## Panel 2 (wide panel shot 1/3rd vertical full width)
+Max is shown sitting down looking to the left
+
+## Panel 3 (wide panel shot 1/3rd vertical full width)
+Max is shown sitting down looking to the right and up
+
+Receptionist:Max Light
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+# Page 11
+
+## Panel 1 
+Max: No one else is here am I the first person
+
+Receptionist: No actually someone was even earlier than you she probably getting tested as we speak. Here is your key card the testing area I right behind doors and to the right. you cant miss it.
+
+## Panel 2
+Max walks in the room and sees Airiona who is being unplugged and they announce her energy capacity. Max notices that she looks like Airiona.
+
+Tester: 8027
+
+Max(thinks): wow not only does she look like Airiona but she has the same energy capacity as well.
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+# Page 12
+
+## Panel 1 
+Tester: You look pretty young to be a father so I'm guessing you are here to register a younger sibling.
+
+Max: actually I'm here for myself
+
+## Panel 2
+Tester: Wow really. I'm mean know you didn't have a kid with you but I just assumed they were in the bathroom or something.
+
+Max looks distressed
+
+## Panel 3
+Airiona takes notice of the conversion as she is putting her hood over her head
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+# Page 13
+
+## Panel 1 
+Tester: Sorry I'm not trying to be mean, it's just that you can't really become a cybervator without a tail.
+
+Tester: in order to be eligible for a Cyber.Beast you need to show that you can synergize with it which is impossible without a tail.
+
+Max explains his controller to the receptionist 
+
+Test: I understand there is no rule against who can be a cybervator but Since you don't have a tail I cant properly test your energy capacity so I'll have write your energy capacity as zero. We are only taking the top 10(0) this year. We usually get 100(0) applicants every year so unless we get less than 10(0) applicants with and energy capacity greater or equal to yours the chance of you being accepted is basically zero.
+
+Tester: look at her she has a tail and still has not been accept
+
+
+## Last Panel
+Airiona seen is leaving out of a different door than what Max came through and is still looking back listening to the conversation
+
+Tester: If all goes well we will pair you with your first Cyber.Beast.
+
+Do you know how long it will take 
+
+Test It depends on how many applications we get
+
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+# Page 14
+
+Max is excited to see that the train is outside already and that he will not need to wait, but the train takes off before he can get on.
+
+Max: Oh come one. ~~Torrey~~ What when does the next train arrive.
+
+CSD: The next train is estimated to arrive in 5 minutes
+
+Max oh man I have to wait that long.
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+# Page 15
+Airiona is seen escaping
+
+A cybervator runs out yelling about Airiona being a Cyvolter
+
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+# Page 16
+## Panel 1
+Airiona is seen flying
+
+She spots Max getting on the train an decides to follow it
+
+## Panel 2
+In the last panel it is seen that her arm is missing
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+# Page 17
+Airiona keeps pace with the fast moving train
+
+Airiona: I'm so low on energy I can barely keep up
+
+Airiona: I'm not sure I can hold on much longer
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+# Page 18
+The train stops
+
+Airiona: please let this be his stop
+
+Max gets of the train
+
+Airiona there he is
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+# Page 19
+# Panel 1 (full height 2/3 width)
+The focus is on Max with a worms eye view of Airiona following him
+
+# Panel 2 (full height 1/3 width)
+Airiona falls in front of the house of Max
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+# Page 2
+
+*Xenos continues the fight*
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+# Page 20
+Airiona is seen on the door step of Max's house
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+# Page 3
+
+*Xenos continues the fight*
+
+*a zoom out shoot of the match and the score board, which shows 1 second left*
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+# Page 4
+
+*Xenos loses the fight*
+
+Commentator: And there you have it folks ReNet is the world champions
+
+*The audience can be heard cheering while Max's head is down in disappointment*
+
+Mack: It's ok Max we'll get em' next time.
+
+*Mack looks to find Max missing*
+
+Mack(bewildered look): Max?
+
+Mack(look of fear): Oh no!-use normal speech balloon don't use exclamation as he has an idea of were he went-
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+# Page 5
+
+## Pane l
+Kyshumu is giving an interview with a crowd surrounding them. Max is seen squeezing through
+
+## Panel 2 overlay top right side
+**Max:** Hey mister 
+
+Max tugs on his tail and xenos grabs it
+
+## Panel 3 over bottom right side
+\* tug tug \*
+
+**Max:** Hey mister 
+
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+# Page 6
+Transitioning from the fist panel of the last page
+
+Kyshumu turns around with the same crowd surrounding them. Mack is seen squeezing through them.
+
+
+*Kyshumu Turns around with a smile preparing to give him an autograph*
+
+**Kyshumu:** Hey there little guy
+
+**Max:** I don't like you anymore
+
+Kyshumu has a look of surprised disappointment
+
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-7-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-7-script.md
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+# Page 7
+**Mack**(*pulling Max away*): I'm sorry he's upset because you beat his favorite Cybervator
+
+**Kyshumu:** Ha Ha Ha. That's ok. What's your name. I'll give you an autograph
+
+**Max(yells):** I don't want your autograph. My name is Max. Just you wait when I'm old enough I'm gonna be a better Cybervator than even you. Just you wait I'll destroy you
+
+**Kyshumu** (*rubs the top of his head*): Ha ha ha. Okay, I'll be waiting.
+
+## Last Panel
+*The panel is black*
+1. Spike: Hey Max hey
+1. CSD: \*Beep Beep Beep\*
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-8-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-8-script.md
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+# Page 8
+
+## Panel 1
+12 years later
+
+Max is seen sleeping on a train. He is awakened by spike or his CSD
+  1. Spike: Hey Max hey get up isn't this your stop
+  1. CSD: \*Beep Beep Beep\* Rise and shine Max you have arrived at your destination
+
+## Panel 2
+Max gets off the train into the corridor of the train station
+
+Akia is smirking leaned up against the door entrance into the hub.
+
+Akia: are you here for 
+
+## Panel 3
+Head shot of Max as he gets closer
+
+Max (scowls): come on I don't have time for this I'm gonna be late. It's first come first serve, can you let me trough please
+
+## Panel 4
+Akia slaps the back of Max's head and his CSD turns yellow
+
+Akia: No! you don't even have a tail hoe the hack do you think you can become a cybervator with out one. You'll just embarrass your self
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+# Page 9
+
+## Panel 1
+Spike Walks in and intervenes
+
+Spike: what's going on here/ is there a problem
+
+## Panel 2
+Akia: I was just telling Max good luck.
+
+She lets Max go
+
+## Panel 3
+Max Face has a look of doubt but he enters the building regardless.
+
+Max: <maybe she's right. don't think like that she just wants me to doubt my self>
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/1/readme.md
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+# Episode 1 Outline
+## Act 1
+Pages: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
+
+The ending of CNS Championships is shown. An 8 year old Max is shown watching as a fan
+
+After the Match between Xenos and Kyshumu which Xenos loses Kyshumu has an interview with maybe a young Spike but is interrupted by Max.
+
+## Act 2
+Pages: 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15
+
+12 years later Max feels he is now ready to compete in the CNS
+
+Max is seen sleeping on a train. He is awakened by spike or his CSD
+
+Max goes to initiations ceremony in which cybervator are given their first Cyber.Beast
+
+Akia blocks Max from leaving the train station and is teased about being delusional for trying to become a cybervator when he doesn't even have a tail. 
+
+Spike Walks in and intervenes
+
+Akia lets Max go
+
+Max starts to have doubts but enters the building regardless regardless
+
+Max is the first one there and waits in the lobby to get his first Cyber.Beast
+
+Max Name is called
+
+--------------
+
+Max is rejected
+
+Max tries to explain to them that he doesn't need a tail to use a Cyber.Beast showing them the device he made
+
+He asks if they can at least let him test/demonstrate it
+
+Airiona can be seen hidden from site grimacing and peaking at what is going on
+
+After Max leaves a cybervator comes rushing in yelling and tells/asks them about Airiona
+
+### Act 3
+Pages: 16, 17, 18, 19, 20
+
+
+She happened to see and remembers that that Max was able to customize his CSD so she decides to follow him home flying behind him and the train that he is ridding on
+
+Just as Max is about to close his door he sees Airiona outside of his house at the foot of his door.
+
+
+
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/10/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/10/readme.md
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+# Episode 10 Outline
+## Act 1
+Max is in cyberspace he sees another cybervator maybe a cyvolter getting double/triple team team Max and maybe Airiona joins in to even things up
+
+## Act 2
+
+## Act 3
+Max helps them win while also increasing his ranking match
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/11/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/11/readme.md
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+# Episode 11 Outline
+## Act 1
+A montage is shown of the reputation that Max has made help other cybervators and giving 70% of his earnings and how it has earned him many fans.
+## Act 2
+## Act 3
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-1-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-1-script.md
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+# Page 1
+## Panel 1  (full page width 2/3rd height)
+Max:Airiona? Whoa what happened, why aren't you healing!?
+
+Airiona(holding her arm stub): My argh My CSD is broken/damaged
+
+## Panel 2
+Max turns to run for help or call for help with his CSD
+
+Max: I'll call for help
diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-10-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-10-script.md
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+# Page 10
+ As Airiona leaves taking a blueprint of the controllers with her it can be seen in the Background on Max's CSD a news report of Airiona breaking into the Hub he was at
+
+## Panel 1
+Xenos is seen By Max who appears star struck
+
+Max: You're Xenos
+
+Xenos: Yep in the flesh/Long time no see
+
+Airiona: hey do you mind if I take a copy of the blue prints for your controller
+
+Max still appears star struck as he is looking at xenos while hand type the commands to send the blue prints
+
+Max: yeah sure thing I'll email it to you.
+
+Airiona: Thanks
+
+Max: You still remember me!?
+
+Xenos (smirks): lets go Airiona
+
+Airiona: See ya/good luck maybe next time we meet it'll be in cyberspace
+
+As Airiona leaves taking a blueprint of the controllers with her it can be seen in the Background on Max's CSD a news report of Airiona breaking into the Hub he was at
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+# Page 2
+## Panel 1  (transition from panel 1 page 1)
+Airiona is extended her hand giving Max he CSD
+Airiona: No don't... There is no time I need you to fix it
+
+Max: But I'm not a doctor 
+
+## Panel 2
+A zoom in shot of her damaged CSD
+
+Airiona(extended speech balloon from panel 1 were she hands him her CSD): no argh my CSD
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		Airiona is seen on the door step of Max's house