Cyber.beast(makkusu) - #4
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This reverts commit f955754.
Expanded on the beggings of Minia and Makkusu's relationship and it cause and effect on driving the plot.
Episode one will contest of both the Ordinary World and Call To Adventure. This way the main character is more properly introduced
This will allow this event to foreshadow the CNS being rigid
- Created a depth chart table and added Cybervators to Makkusu's team - Removed the dialogue between Mina and Makkusu since they are now on the same team
Moved the Dialouge in which Airiona berates Cybervators from episode 4 to 5 as it fits the theme of episode 5 better
Changed the person who makes the ultimatum to Yahria as the CNS has been the primary backer of Makkusu up to this point.
- This still allow this event to foreshadow the CNS being rigid. - Using Kyshumu rather than Xenos for this scene provides even more leeway for potential future story developments. - Also made a younger Spike as the possible Interviewer
Having an opponent set makes thing far more easier in terms of visualizing the fight scene. This is because I know how each character will act and react in the scenerio.
- Avis and Echo is now them same person.. - Added Foreshadowing as Yaharia recgonizes what should be hidden acient technolgy
Moved the scenes in which Makkusu accepts the invite and Airiona and Xenos discussing it from episode 3 to 4
A major effect it has is that she must mask her identity becoming know as eclipse The founding of a "new network"
- This will serve as comic relief
…yd/Cyber.Beast into Cyber.Beast(Makkusu)
This scene serves as exposition for the rules of the league and establishes the relationship between Ace and Knilla
This prevents Max from having to do a monologue
Kyshumu's inability to cut the tails of other Cybervators and preferring to kill them actually foreshadows events from his past that ultimatlly caused and effect the current events in the story Write what you know: Kyhsumu revoking protection relates to real world event in which countries threatened to not protect smaller countries if they comply in voting. But in the Cyber.Universe this applies to each individuals sense each Citizen serves as there own country
Added events that take place leading to the revolution which is base on the homestead strike
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