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The first line of this repository is written as, "this repository is aimed to adapt android float window permission in most of phone models and how to request it at runtime"
This sentence is written in passive voice and should be written in active voice as per the grammatical guidelines of writing.
Secondly, the first letter of the sentence should be upper case letter.
Thirdly, the superlative degree should be used with 'the'.
So, the corrected sentence could be written as:
"This repository aims to adapt android float window permission in most of the phone models and how to request it at runtime."
Thank you.

The first line of this repository is written as, "this repository is aimed to adapt android float window permission in most of phone models and how to request it at runtime"
This sentence is written in passive voice and should be written in active voice as per the grammatical guidelines of writing.
Secondly, the first letter of the sentence should be upper case letter.
Thirdly, the superlative degree should be used with 'the'.
So, the corrected sentence could be written as:
"**This** repository **aims** to adapt android float window permission in most of **the** phone models and how to request it at runtime."
Thank you.
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# FloatWindowPermission

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# FloatWindowPermission
this repository is aimed to adapt android float window permission in most of phone models and how to request it at runtime </br>
This repository aims to adapt android float window permission in most of the phone models and how to request it at runtime. </br>

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