Define prosumer up front, in its own opening beat - #10
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The definition was a subordinate clause in the middle of a sentence whose main job was explaining the document's name, so the term that the whole architecture rests on arrived as an aside and did not stick. It now opens the document on its own, and the Janus metaphor follows and refers back to it — the name earns its image from a term the reader already holds, rather than carrying the definition as a parenthetical. Bolded at first use so it can be found again. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: the Institute <info@ntari.org>
Rewriting the Janus sentence dropped the registered anchor for INTRO-janus, "faces demands for both production and consumption", and failed D4. The phrase is back verbatim inside the new sentence, which still reads with the definition ahead of it. Conformance passes. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: the Institute <info@ntari.org>
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Conformance was failing on this branch and is now fixed — flagging it since I opened the PR before the check finished. Rewriting the Janus sentence dropped the
The definition still leads the document, which was the point of the change. I have updated the quoted text in the description to match. Conformance and DCO both pass. |
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Third of the six review points on the document: place a strong
prosumerdefinition early enough that it sticks.Why it wasn't sticking
The term was already defined on first use, but as a subordinate clause inside a sentence whose main job was explaining where the document's name comes from. The vivid part — a god with two faces — sat in an em-dash aside, and the definition trailed behind it. So the term the entire architecture rests on arrived as an aside.
What changed
The definition now opens the document on its own, and the Janus metaphor follows it rather than carrying it:
Two things this buys beyond findability. The name now earns its image from a term the reader already holds, instead of introducing both at once. And "the two faces are the same person" sets up the paragraph that follows it —
The name's second face is political— which previously asked the reader to think in faces before the document had given them one.Bolded at first use so it can be found again on a re-read.
Note on ordering
Opened against
mainrather than stacked on #9, so the two can be reviewed separately. They touch different hunks of the same file and merge cleanly in either order.🤖 Generated with Claude Code