From 4c19c498b432817d1d0a7da61dfc815afbc54649 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: cleverplugs Date: Mon, 17 Nov 2014 11:36:02 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] first tweak of first page (inspired by Chinese auto-translation) --- dagger.txt | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/dagger.txt b/dagger.txt index 1564c1b..882bdd8 100644 --- a/dagger.txt +++ b/dagger.txt @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -Is this a dagger which I see before me, -The handle toward my hand? Come, let me clutch thee. -I have thee not, and yet I see thee still. +Wow. is this a dagger? +Come on, let me hold you tight. +I don't have you, but I still see you. Art thou not, fatal vision, sensible To feeling as to sight? or art thou but A dagger of the mind, a false creation,