diff --git a/docs/index.html b/docs/index.html
index cc745ce..0f12c79 100644
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@@ -113,21 +113,20 @@
}
/* ---------- the eye / aperture motif ----------
- One reusable glyph: a cold, almond eye (unchanged register — cyan
- sclera, sepia iris, dark-red pupil) with a rose-window's radial rim
- — thin desaturated spoke segments, cathedral-glass architecture —
- engraved into the white between iris and lid. Clipped to the sclera
- (#eyeScleraClip) so the spokes read as detail *inside* the eye, never
- as a separate flower silhouette bursting past it.
- The clip-path is now a dilating circle rather than a sliding band: it
+ Restraint pass (owner feedback: the shipped rose-window hybrid read as
+ "too cheesy / too prominent" — LULL's pillar is restraint over
+ spectacle). One reusable glyph: a cold, almond eye (unchanged register
+ — cyan sclera, sepia iris, dark-red pupil). The rose-window rim from
+ the previous pass is pulled back hard: the twelve spokes are gone, and
+ the ring itself is now a hairline, near-invisible hint rather than a
+ visible ornament — a texture you'd have to look for, not a set piece.
+ The clip-path is a dilating circle rather than a sliding band: it
grows from the center, so opening reads as a pupil/aperture actually
- dilating — pupil first, then iris, then the rose rim, then the white
- — rather than an eyelid parting top-to-bottom. Nothing about
- visibility of real *content* ever depends on this — it is purely
- decorative, so a failure in the script below never breaks the page,
- it just leaves the eye at its calm CSS default (--scroll-lid: 25%,
- declared on :root) — which, at this geometry, already shows a full
- pupil, iris, and rim: the calm state reads as an eye, not a bud. */
+ dilating — pupil first, then iris, then the white — rather than an
+ eyelid parting top-to-bottom. Nothing about visibility of real
+ *content* ever depends on this — it is purely decorative, so a
+ failure in the script below never breaks the page, it just leaves the
+ eye at its calm CSS default (--scroll-lid: 25%, declared on :root). */
.eye {
display: inline-block;
width: 46px;
@@ -140,17 +139,15 @@
clip-path: circle(var(--lid) at 50% 50%);
}
.eye-white { fill: none; stroke: var(--cyan); stroke-width: 2.5; opacity: .5; }
- /* The rim: a thin ring plus twelve short spokes, cold and desaturated
- (cyan/steel, not the rose-window prototype's amber) — a cathedral
- window's structure quoted, not its warmth. Kept faint on purpose: it
- is a texture the iris sits inside, never competing with it. */
- .eye-rose-ring { fill: none; stroke: var(--faint); stroke-width: .7; opacity: .4; }
- .eye-rose-spokes line { stroke: var(--cyan); stroke-width: .6; opacity: .28; }
- /* A faint cold glow behind the iris — the one place this variant allows
- itself an accent beyond stroke work. Literal hex, not var(--cyan),
+ /* What's left of the rose-window rim after the restraint pass: no
+ spokes, and the ring itself down to a hairline the eye barely admits
+ to having. */
+ .eye-rose-ring { fill: none; stroke: var(--faint); stroke-width: .4; opacity: .1; }
+ /* A faint cold glow behind the iris, cut back with everything else so it
+ reads as a trace of light, not a bloom. Literal hex, not var(--cyan),
because SVG gradient stops read the value at parse time; keep in sync
with --cyan (#7f9aa2) by hand if that ever changes. */
- .eye-glow { opacity: .55; }
+ .eye-glow { opacity: .3; }
.eye-iris { fill: none; stroke: var(--sepia); stroke-width: 2; opacity: .6; }
.eye-pupil { fill: var(--red); opacity: .6; }
@@ -161,14 +158,17 @@
separate icons. Sits behind normal page content (z-index: -1); every
section's own background/text still paints over it normally, so it
reads most clearly wherever a section has no opaque background of its
- own — which is exactly the phase-descent section this is built for. */
+ own — which is exactly the phase-descent section this is built for.
+ Restraint pass: sized and dimmed down hard from the shipped hybrid —
+ it should read as a faint, cold, watching presence you almost don't
+ notice until it opens, not a centerpiece. */
.scroll-eye {
position: fixed;
top: 50%; left: 50%;
transform: translate(-50%, -50%);
z-index: -1;
- width: min(46vw, 26rem);
- opacity: .14;
+ width: min(26vw, 14rem);
+ opacity: .08;
pointer-events: none;
}
.scroll-eye .eye { --lid: var(--scroll-lid); width: 100%; }
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