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Author: Thomas Stromberg

src/about/index.njk

@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ title: About
 
 <section class="about-hero">
   <div class="about-hero__container">
-    <h1 class="about-hero__title">ABOUT</h1>
-    <p class="about-hero__subtitle">Enterprise grade, startup speed.</p>
+    <h1 class="about-hero__title">About us</h1>
+    <p class="about-hero__subtitle">We make tools we'd want to use ourselves.</p>
   </div>
 </section>
 
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ title: About
       <div class="about-story__card about-story__card--white">
         <div class="about-story__header">
           <img src="/assets/goose-lab-techs.webp" alt="Origin story" class="about-story__image">
-          <h2 class="about-story__title">STARTED AT GOOGLE. FINISHED HERE.</h2>
+          <h2 class="about-story__title">Started at Google. Finished here.</h2>
         </div>
         <p class="about-story__text">Ready to Review began as a prototype created by our founder while at Google. Some of its ideas were released with <a href="https://github.com/google/triage-party" class="about-story__link">Triage Party</a> (used by Kubernetes), the more difficult parts needed more time to percolate. It's time is now.</p>
       </div>
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ title: About
         <div class="about-story__founder-header">
           <img src="/assets/tstromberg.webp" alt="Thomas Stromberg" class="about-story__founder-image">
           <div>
-            <h2 class="about-story__founder-label">FOUNDER</h2>
+            <h2 class="about-story__founder-label">Founder</h2>
             <p class="about-story__founder-name">Thomas Stromberg</p>
           </div>
         </div>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ title: About
 
 <section class="about-principles">
   <div class="about-principles__container">
-    <h2 class="about-principles__title">PRINCIPLES</h2>
+    <h2 class="about-principles__title">What we believe</h2>
     <div class="about-principles__grid">
       <div class="about-principles__card about-principles__card--yellow">
         <div class="about-principles__icon">
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ title: About
 
 <section class="about-contact">
   <div class="about-contact__container">
-    <h2 class="about-contact__title">LET'S TALK</h2>
-    <p class="about-contact__text">Want to discuss how Ready to Review can help your team?</p>
+    <h2 class="about-contact__title">Say hello</h2>
+    <p class="about-contact__text">Got questions? We're happy to chat.</p>
     <div class="about-contact__buttons">
       <a href="mailto:lets-connect@codegroove.dev" class="about-contact__button about-contact__button--primary">Email us</a>
       <a href="https://calendar.app.google/TbQmeX8iWnvx6Ci89" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" class="about-contact__button about-contact__button--secondary">Book a call</a>