diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-1-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-1-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..e79be45 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-1-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,23 @@ +# Page 1 +## Panel 1 (full page width 2/3rd height) +*The stadium/hub in which a match between Xenos and Kyshumu is being fought in is shown from above* + ++Commentator: ReNet is in the lead but Even with only seconds left in this match it is still to close to call + +## Panel 2 (1/3rd height and width) + +*The focus is on Max as he cups his hands to his mouth cheering for Xenos as he sits on his fathers shoulders* + +Mack: Come on Max lets cheer him on + +[Max(yelling)](#Max): Come on Xenos! + +Mack: Come on Xenos! + + +## Panel 3 (1/3rd height 2/3rd width) +*A half body shot of the front of Xenos and the back of his opponent is shown* + ++ Commentator: Can Xenos complete what would be a historic comeback to lead his team to victory + + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-10-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-10-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..96d6b39 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-10-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,14 @@ +# Page 10 + +## Panel 1 (wide panel shot 1/3rd vertical full width) +A full front shot of Max is shown standing in the empty lobby looking to the right + +Max is the first one there and waits in the lobby to get his first Cyber.Beast + +## Panel 2 (wide panel shot 1/3rd vertical full width) +Max is shown sitting down looking to the left + +## Panel 3 (wide panel shot 1/3rd vertical full width) +Max is shown sitting down looking to the right and up + +Receptionist:Max Light \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-11-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-11-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..2f6a0ea --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-11-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,13 @@ +# Page 11 + +## Panel 1 +Max: No one else is here am I the first person + +Receptionist: No actually someone was even earlier than you she probably getting tested as we speak. Here is your key card the testing area I right behind doors and to the right. you cant miss it. + +## Panel 2 +Max walks in the room and sees Airiona who is being unplugged and they announce her energy capacity. Max notices that she looks like Airiona. + +Tester: 8027 + +Max(thinks): wow not only does she look like Airiona but she has the same energy capacity as well. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-12-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-12-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..8de5a6d --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-12-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,14 @@ +# Page 12 + +## Panel 1 +Tester: You look pretty young to be a father so I'm guessing you are here to register a younger sibling. + +Max: actually I'm here for myself + +## Panel 2 +Tester: Wow really. I'm mean know you didn't have a kid with you but I just assumed they were in the bathroom or something. + +Max looks distressed + +## Panel 3 +Airiona takes notice of the conversion as she is putting her hood over her head diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-13-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-13-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..e29d92f --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-13-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,23 @@ +# Page 13 + +## Panel 1 +Tester: Sorry I'm not trying to be mean, it's just that you can't really become a cybervator without a tail. + +Tester: in order to be eligible for a Cyber.Beast you need to show that you can synergize with it which is impossible without a tail. + +Max explains his controller to the receptionist + +Test: I understand there is no rule against who can be a cybervator but Since you don't have a tail I cant properly test your energy capacity so I'll have write your energy capacity as zero. We are only taking the top 10(0) this year. We usually get 100(0) applicants every year so unless we get less than 10(0) applicants with and energy capacity greater or equal to yours the chance of you being accepted is basically zero. + +Tester: look at her she has a tail and still has not been accept + + +## Last Panel +Airiona seen is leaving out of a different door than what Max came through and is still looking back listening to the conversation + +Tester: If all goes well we will pair you with your first Cyber.Beast. + +Do you know how long it will take + +Test It depends on how many applications we get + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-14-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-14-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..f9eca24 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-14-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,9 @@ +# Page 14 + +Max is excited to see that the train is outside already and that he will not need to wait, but the train takes off before he can get on. + +Max: Oh come one. ~~Torrey~~ What when does the next train arrive. + +CSD: The next train is estimated to arrive in 5 minutes + +Max oh man I have to wait that long. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-15-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-15-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..5501ebf --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-15-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,5 @@ +# Page 15 +Airiona is seen escaping + +A cybervator runs out yelling about Airiona being a Cyvolter + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-16-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-16-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..b2e9314 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-16-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,8 @@ +# Page 16 +## Panel 1 +Airiona is seen flying + +She spots Max getting on the train an decides to follow it + +## Panel 2 +In the last panel it is seen that her arm is missing \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-17-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-17-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..dfa8664 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-17-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,6 @@ +# Page 17 +Airiona keeps pace with the fast moving train + +Airiona: I'm so low on energy I can barely keep up + +Airiona: I'm not sure I can hold on much longer \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-18-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-18-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..2f90f79 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-18-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,8 @@ +# Page 18 +The train stops + +Airiona: please let this be his stop + +Max gets of the train + +Airiona there he is \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-19-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-19-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..e22357f --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-19-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,6 @@ +# Page 19 +# Panel 1 (full height 2/3 width) +The focus is on Max with a worms eye view of Airiona following him + +# Panel 2 (full height 1/3 width) +Airiona falls in front of the house of Max \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-2-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-2-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..0eadf49 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-2-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,3 @@ +# Page 2 + +*Xenos continues the fight* \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-20-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-20-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..8536502 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-20-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,2 @@ +# Page 20 +Airiona is seen on the door step of Max's house \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-3-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-3-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..39c2070 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-3-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,5 @@ +# Page 3 + +*Xenos continues the fight* + +*a zoom out shoot of the match and the score board, which shows 1 second left* \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-4-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-4-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..6ccf4f4 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-4-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,15 @@ +# Page 4 + +*Xenos loses the fight* + +Commentator: And there you have it folks ReNet is the world champions + +*The audience can be heard cheering while Max's head is down in disappointment* + +Mack: It's ok Max we'll get em' next time. + +*Mack looks to find Max missing* + +Mack(bewildered look): Max? + +Mack(look of fear): Oh no!-use normal speech balloon don't use exclamation as he has an idea of were he went- \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-5-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-5-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..48629db --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-5-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,15 @@ +# Page 5 + +## Pane l +Kyshumu is giving an interview with a crowd surrounding them. Max is seen squeezing through + +## Panel 2 overlay top right side +**Max:** Hey mister + +Max tugs on his tail and xenos grabs it + +## Panel 3 over bottom right side +\* tug tug \* + +**Max:** Hey mister + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-6-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-6-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..523740b --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-6-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,14 @@ +# Page 6 +Transitioning from the fist panel of the last page + +Kyshumu turns around with the same crowd surrounding them. Mack is seen squeezing through them. + + +*Kyshumu Turns around with a smile preparing to give him an autograph* + +**Kyshumu:** Hey there little guy + +**Max:** I don't like you anymore + +Kyshumu has a look of surprised disappointment + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-7-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-7-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..e293fa0 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-7-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,13 @@ +# Page 7 +**Mack**(*pulling Max away*): I'm sorry he's upset because you beat his favorite Cybervator + +**Kyshumu:** Ha Ha Ha. That's ok. What's your name. I'll give you an autograph + +**Max(yells):** I don't want your autograph. My name is Max. Just you wait when I'm old enough I'm gonna be a better Cybervator than even you. Just you wait I'll destroy you + +**Kyshumu** (*rubs the top of his head*): Ha ha ha. Okay, I'll be waiting. + +## Last Panel +*The panel is black* +1. Spike: Hey Max hey +1. CSD: \*Beep Beep Beep\* \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-8-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-8-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..314da9c --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-8-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,25 @@ +# Page 8 + +## Panel 1 +12 years later + +Max is seen sleeping on a train. He is awakened by spike or his CSD + 1. Spike: Hey Max hey get up isn't this your stop + 1. CSD: \*Beep Beep Beep\* Rise and shine Max you have arrived at your destination + +## Panel 2 +Max gets off the train into the corridor of the train station + +Akia is smirking leaned up against the door entrance into the hub. + +Akia: are you here for + +## Panel 3 +Head shot of Max as he gets closer + +Max (scowls): come on I don't have time for this I'm gonna be late. It's first come first serve, can you let me trough please + +## Panel 4 +Akia slaps the back of Max's head and his CSD turns yellow + +Akia: No! you don't even have a tail hoe the hack do you think you can become a cybervator with out one. You'll just embarrass your self \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/page-9-script.md b/comic/makkusu/1/page-9-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..fac3a3a --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/page-9-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,16 @@ +# Page 9 + +## Panel 1 +Spike Walks in and intervenes + +Spike: what's going on here/ is there a problem + +## Panel 2 +Akia: I was just telling Max good luck. + +She lets Max go + +## Panel 3 +Max Face has a look of doubt but he enters the building regardless. + +Max: \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/1/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/1/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..4a84c49 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/1/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,51 @@ +# Episode 1 Outline +## Act 1 +Pages: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 + +The ending of CNS Championships is shown. An 8 year old Max is shown watching as a fan + +After the Match between Xenos and Kyshumu which Xenos loses Kyshumu has an interview with maybe a young Spike but is interrupted by Max. + +## Act 2 +Pages: 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 + +12 years later Max feels he is now ready to compete in the CNS + +Max is seen sleeping on a train. He is awakened by spike or his CSD + +Max goes to initiations ceremony in which cybervator are given their first Cyber.Beast + +Akia blocks Max from leaving the train station and is teased about being delusional for trying to become a cybervator when he doesn't even have a tail. + +Spike Walks in and intervenes + +Akia lets Max go + +Max starts to have doubts but enters the building regardless regardless + +Max is the first one there and waits in the lobby to get his first Cyber.Beast + +Max Name is called + +-------------- + +Max is rejected + +Max tries to explain to them that he doesn't need a tail to use a Cyber.Beast showing them the device he made + +He asks if they can at least let him test/demonstrate it + +Airiona can be seen hidden from site grimacing and peaking at what is going on + +After Max leaves a cybervator comes rushing in yelling and tells/asks them about Airiona + +### Act 3 +Pages: 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 + + +She happened to see and remembers that that Max was able to customize his CSD so she decides to follow him home flying behind him and the train that he is ridding on + +Just as Max is about to close his door he sees Airiona outside of his house at the foot of his door. + + + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/10/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/10/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..0101726 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/10/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,8 @@ +# Episode 10 Outline +## Act 1 +Max is in cyberspace he sees another cybervator maybe a cyvolter getting double/triple team team Max and maybe Airiona joins in to even things up + +## Act 2 + +## Act 3 +Max helps them win while also increasing his ranking match \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/11/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/11/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..6d2a780 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/11/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,5 @@ +# Episode 11 Outline +## Act 1 +A montage is shown of the reputation that Max has made help other cybervators and giving 70% of his earnings and how it has earned him many fans. +## Act 2 +## Act 3 diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-1-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-1-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..6549dde --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-1-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,10 @@ +# Page 1 +## Panel 1 (full page width 2/3rd height) +Max:Airiona? Whoa what happened, why aren't you healing!? + +Airiona(holding her arm stub): My argh My CSD is broken/damaged + +## Panel 2 +Max turns to run for help or call for help with his CSD + +Max: I'll call for help \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-10-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-10-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..5c5f542 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-10-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,25 @@ +# Page 10 + As Airiona leaves taking a blueprint of the controllers with her it can be seen in the Background on Max's CSD a news report of Airiona breaking into the Hub he was at + +## Panel 1 +Xenos is seen By Max who appears star struck + +Max: You're Xenos + +Xenos: Yep in the flesh/Long time no see + +Airiona: hey do you mind if I take a copy of the blue prints for your controller + +Max still appears star struck as he is looking at xenos while hand type the commands to send the blue prints + +Max: yeah sure thing I'll email it to you. + +Airiona: Thanks + +Max: You still remember me!? + +Xenos (smirks): lets go Airiona + +Airiona: See ya/good luck maybe next time we meet it'll be in cyberspace + +As Airiona leaves taking a blueprint of the controllers with her it can be seen in the Background on Max's CSD a news report of Airiona breaking into the Hub he was at diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-2-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-2-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..9fdeb7b --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-2-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,11 @@ +# Page 2 +## Panel 1 (transition from panel 1 page 1) +Airiona is extended her hand giving Max he CSD +Airiona: No don't... There is no time I need you to fix it + +Max: But I'm not a doctor + +## Panel 2 +A zoom in shot of her damaged CSD + +Airiona(extended speech balloon from panel 1 were she hands him her CSD): no argh my CSD \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-3-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-3-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..c839bcc --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-3-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,26 @@ +# Page 3 +## Panel 1 + +The camera is in the house pointed towards the door +Max is shown helping Airiona into his house while the door slides shut behind them + +## Panel 2 +Max sits Airiona on his couch + +## Panel 3 + She looks around and sees that his room is decorated with a ton of Cybervtaor Memorabilia + + Airiona: So I see watch a lot of the CNS League. You're a fan of the ___ BluNet team + + Max: well I am more of a fan of what ever team Xenos + + Airiona: is he the one that inspired you to become a Cybervator + + ## Panel 4 + Max: wait how did you know + + Airiona: oh um well + + Max(with joking smile): have you been stalking me? + + Airiona(she smiles with shifty eyes): Ha ha ha ye--a diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-4-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-4-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..f7236c2 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-4-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,3 @@ +# Page 4 +## Panel 1 +Max is seen fixing her CSD while she is sitting on his couch \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-5-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-5-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..9731bd9 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-5-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,9 @@ +# Page 5 +## Panel 1 (transition from page 4) +Max is seen fixing her CSD while she is sitting on his couch with her eyes closed head tilted back Max head is turned around looking at her. + +Max: Are you sleep + +Airiona: zzzzzzzzzz. + +Max: This my chance she already has a Cyber.Beast I'll just use her CSD to test my Cyber.Beast controller. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-6-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-6-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..8bfe9fe --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-6-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,12 @@ +# Page 6 +## Panel 1 (transition from page 5) +Airiona is standing behind him or shown awake while he tinkers with her CSD + +Max: This should only take a second/one more...It works + +## Panel 2 (overlay) +Airiona(yells): What are you doing! + +## Panel 3 (overlay) +Max has a look of dismay +Max: This my chance she already has a Cyber.Beast I'll just use her CSD to test my Cyber.Beast controller. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-7-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-7-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..f96ce65 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-7-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,20 @@ +# Page 7 +## Panel 1 + + Airiona: You/We don't have time for that right now. You need to fix my CSD so that I can heal my arm. +## panel 2 + Max(look of relief): Oh! Right. + + ## Panel 3 + + Max: wait. umm. Actually I'm already finished + +## Panel 4 +Airiona inspects her CSD + + Airiona: Already/Really. It usually takes hours to fix these things + +## Panel 5 +Airiona Synergizes with her Cyber.Beast + +Airiona's CSD(red alert): \*ding ding\* distress signal sent help is on the way \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-8-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-8-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..d47300f --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-8-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,24 @@ +# Page 8 +## Panel 1 +Airiona's arm begins to regenerate + + Airiona: (You know) You're pretty smart + +## Panel 2 +Airiona's arm is regeneration is complete and she test and moves her new hand + + Airiona: And not just because you were able to fix my CSD so quickly + + Airiona: you see, you were able to make the CSD and controller because unlike others you doesn't rely on cyber.beast to code he does is on as society does not have the skills they once did + + Airiona: You deserve to be a cybervator all citizens do actually + + Max: you're starting to sound like one of those... + + Airiona: Cyvolter o No I would never. + + Max tells her that it is some thing he made a long time ago when had dreams of becoming a cybervator + + Max: Not really I just most are combined ideas from real scientist to put ideas together to come up with a new one + + Airiona: No unlike most scientist who have become singular focused and don't combined ideas from others you put ideas together to come up with a new one \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/page-9-script.md b/comic/makkusu/2/page-9-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..ef7e95f --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/page-9-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,16 @@ +# Page 9 +## Panel 1 +Max: Nobody is here yet maybe I didn't fix it right. + + Max: you wanna watch something while we/you wait + + turns on his CSD's TV + + TV: this just in the hub in sector 1.27.323 has been attack by the Cyvolters + +Max: Oh wow I was just there. And you won't believe this but there was some that looked just like you there + +Airiona: oh no + +## Panel 2 +\*Knock Knock\* \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/2/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/2/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..6ba6ef3 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/2/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,25 @@ +# Episode 2 Outline +## Act 1 +Max asks Airiona what happened + +## Act 2 +Max helps Airiona into his house to fix her CSD + +- Airiona notices that Max is a big CNS fan by all stuff in his home/room + +- Max Decides to try to sneak and use Airiona Cyber.Beast/CSD to test his Cyber.Beast Controller with out her permission. Airiona comes up behind him creating the possibility of punishment + + + on the next page Max looks with dismay + + +- After beginning her arm regeneration process Airiona talks exciting about his creation while they wait + + +As they wait Max turns on the TV on his CSD while asking if she wants to watch something while waiting +## Act 3 +- Airiona has a look of shame as she knows that if puts on the TV he may see a news report of her break in + + Just as she is about to decline watching television on Max's CSD Xenos arrives to pick up Airiona + +- As Airiona leaves taking a blueprint of the controllers with her it can be seen in the Background on Max's CSD a news report of Airiona breaking into the Hub he was at diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-1-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-1-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..aaf6a32 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-1-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,4 @@ +# Page 1 +Max is worrying about that fact that Airiona is a Cyvolter and that he aided her wondering if he will get in trouble. + +He tells his self he does not have time to worry about it and that he has work to do/submit. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-10-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-10-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..b38119b --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-10-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,8 @@ +# Page 10 +Max: I just got a letter. + +Max is seen sweating and has a look of anticipation + +Max reads the Message out loud. + +Max: Dear Max Light, we are would like to inform you that... \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-2-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-2-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..10111d9 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-2-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,4 @@ +# Page 2 +Max is writing code for his job + +his CSD alerts him that Xenos is about to have a match \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-3-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-3-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..4cf2da3 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-3-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,10 @@ +# Page 3 +Max says that it can wait or he finished just in time + +Max precedes to watch Xenos' match + +Spike: Welcome Spike.TV I'm you're host Spike along with my color commentator Akia + +Spike and Akia talk about Airiona being under investigation for being a Cyvolter and the potential ramifications which includes being released and her cyber.beast taken from her. + +They wonder how Xenos feels being paired with a criminal \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-4-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-4-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..136a1ba --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-4-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,7 @@ +# Page 4 +Spike talks about their opponents + +Harmony and Avis is introduces nicknamed as echo and boom + +They begin their fight + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-5-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-5-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..2b28791 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-5-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,4 @@ +# Page 5 +They continue their fight + +Harmony does not want to participate leaving Avis to fend for his self diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-6-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-6-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..5f3fb44 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-6-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,12 @@ +# Page 6 +They continue their fight + +Airiona decides to provide Xenos with support since harmony is not fighting her + +Airiona uses this opportunity to take down Avis + +Xenos: I though I told you to handle harmony + +Airiona: But she's just standing there + +Harmony unexpectedly jumps in taking down both Airiona and Xenos in one attack diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-7-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-7-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..acfc2fe --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-7-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,5 @@ +# Page 7 +They continue their fight + +Airiona tries to chain Harmony but she breaks it easily while taking down Xenos + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-8-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-8-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..ee9b8b3 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-8-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,6 @@ +# Page 8 +They continue their fight + +Xenos is not given any time to log out and is almost deleted by Airiona but Harmony jumps in front to defend him + +Harmony unpredictably stops \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/page-9-script.md b/comic/makkusu/3/page-9-script.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..fdf337e --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/page-9-script.md @@ -0,0 +1,6 @@ +# Page 9 +Harmony sits down and logs out or time expires, making Xenos and harmony the victors or the match as a draw. Max has a look of astonished disbelief and Spike laughs or vice versa. Akia starts to yell in a fit of rage saying that the match was completely unsatisfying. + +Max: What?! + +While yelling he is interrupted by a notification on his CSD \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/3/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/3/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..9dc9a6a --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/3/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,14 @@ +# Episode 3 Outline +## Act 1 +While working Max is notified that Xenos is about to have a match he stops what he is doing to watch it +Max watches a ranked Cyberspace CNS match with Xenos and Airiona through Spikes commentary feed + +## Act 2 +Harmony decides to start acting difficult in the middle of the match. + + +## Act 3 +Xenos and Airiona completes their match + + +Max gets an invite diff --git a/comic/makkusu/4/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/4/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..3680343 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/4/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,46 @@ +## Episode 4 Outline +## Act 1 + +Xenos learns Airiona sent the invite to which Xenos scolds her because he wanted to trick him into joining. As he know he would never join knowing that it is the Cyvolters. + +Airiona(Scowling): so you wanted to trick him?! (right after she says this to their surprise they get a message accepting the invite.) + +After the match Airiona and Xenos is shown discussing the possibility of Max joining the Cyvolters + +Xenos Discovers that Airiona already sent Max an invite along with a Cyber.Beast + +Airiona: I already sent the invite + +Xenos: When thier + +Airiona: Just a second ago + +Xenos: but what about the Cyber.Beast + +Airiona: I gave him the one we just stole + +Airiona gets a message informing her that the invitation has ben accepted + +Xenos: I guess it worked out in our favor after all + +Max is on the phone with Spike + +The words of the message can be seen on the screen + +Dear Max Light, we are would like to inform you that you have been selected to become a Cyvolter. Once you accept this offer you will be granted the right to use the Cyber.Beast sent along with this letter. + + +Max: can you believe it I'm actually going to become a Cybervator + +After hanging up Max pumps his fist in celebratory fashion + +Max: Yeesss!/Oh yeah! + +## Act 2 +At first Max tries to fight another cybervator but is quickly turned down by the Cybervator he tries to fight + +Max goes into cyberspace on his own to mine Cyber.Beast he gets into trouble and Airiona saves him + +## Act 3 +Max takes down his first Cyber.Beast with the help of Airiona + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/5/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/5/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..b904dae --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/5/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,21 @@ +## Episode 5 Outline + + +## Act 1 +They realize that Max did not not know who they are Cyvolters. + +Max realize that he had join the Cyvolters + +Max what am I gonna do I can't tell Spike who knows what will happen to me if he tells everyone + +## Act 2 +Airiona gets back in contact with Max and explains what they are about. + + Airiona: It’s nice to be around someone smarter than me for a change especially when it is a citizen(minia is smart but does not enough confidence to exercise it) + + Max: But aren't you a cybervator + + Airiona: yea but my family isn’t, and your a perfect example that the distribution of money is misplaced citizen do all of the work while cybervator gets majority of revenue from your work even though they are only one percent of the population. But we’re gonna change all of that. +## Act 3 + + Max decides to join as he does not want to tell Spike that he quit being a cybervator because he is a cyvolter knowing that he will try to capitalize on this info by broadcasting it. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/6/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/6/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..97c39e2 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/6/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,29 @@ +# Episode 6 Outline +## Act 1 +The Cyvolter has established a new network within the CNS called CyTek/CyNet although they don't have a hub they still distribute cyber.beast to it's members any one that is apart of the company is given a Cyber.Beast. They declare their self a citizens league The public may or might know at this point that is a Cyvolter organization. + +Speeding Bullet and Max are the first members. + +Airiona is now going by the name Speeding Bullet to mask her identity + +Airiona: call me Speeding Bullet + +Time has passed after mining cyber.beast Airiona and unranked Max is ready for their first match against Jax and Minia + +Airiona tells Max that Minia and Jax is probably the worst matchup they can get + +## Act 2 +Spike Talks about the New "Citizens league" + +Spike: It's been a week/month since The Cyvolter officially created CyNet/CyTek(named after the tech Max created) everyone is calling it the citizens league. + +Max notices that Minia and Jax seems to be fused with 2 completely different Cyber.Beast at the same time and tells Airiona I thought that wasn't possible. + +Airiona tells Max that they are Xybrids that they have two tails so they can use two cyber.beast at a time. She explain in further detail how it works. + +Max and Jax continues their fight + +## Act 3 +The commentators point Jax is relentless in his fight with Jax as he is known as the type that never backs down from a fight and does not hold back no mater his opponent. + +Max is on the verge of losing his cyber.beast which is pointed out by the commentator \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/7/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/7/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..69c1f1d --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/7/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,32 @@ +# Episode 7 Outline +## Act 1 +Just before Max is defeat Airiona uses her chains to pull him to safety while taking a hit from Minia and yells at him to eject as he only has one cyber.beast she then loses her Cyber.Beast to save Max + +## Act 2 +1 week later + +After losing multiple matches Spike offers to make Max a co-owner or employee since he will be able to pursue is passion in a more realistic manner. Just because it is not what does not matter as long as it still aligns with your vision it is still your passion. He tells him that from what he has seen that he is not cut out for the CNS that not being angle to synergize is to much of a disadvantage. That he has was a hinderance to Airiona as he has never seen her perform so poorly. She gave up her chance at the championships just to help him. + +Spike tells Max that only the top broadcasting studio get to commentate the Championships each year + +It would do wonders for our channels ratings to have former Cybervator on our team. It might be the boost we need to get chosen to broadcast the Championship + +Max tells him that he is a white/green type and doesn't have the affinity to be a broadcaster? spike responds we could use a white type like you especially one so knowledgeable about... Max cuts him off turning him down thinking he is on the path to becoming a cybervator(Max later accepts the request after the CNS championships but maybe it is to late). He tells him that he wants to succeed on his own merit. + +Spike tells him that he has talents that should not be wasted and passive aggressively puts down cybervators in general pointing out the cons. he also tells him that he should not put the on a pedestal like he is worshiping them. + +He tells Max to give it another shot but he shouldn't wait on an uncertainty forever +Airiona contacts Max asking if he is ready for a match against her someone else or to mine cyber.beast. + +Max: but the first Championship match is about to start. + +Airiona: You have yet to win a single match you dont have that luxury. If you're serious about being a cybervator now you need to take ever opportunity you can get. If you are not all in then I guess you're on your own.You need practice everyone else is watching this is the best time to mine cyber.beast thier will be no one else to compete with. + +## Act 3 +Airiona and Max are in cyberspace while the 22?.3 championships is going on + +The announcer talks about how team Miniajax has not won a championship match since becoming a Cybervator and that she is a disappointment as a Xybrid Cybervator and will likely lose against Ace and Alex who might be retiring after this fight as he might become the next BluNet chief. + +The satellite in which Minia and Jax is fighting on malfunctions causing Minia to fall back down to earth + + diff --git a/comic/makkusu/8/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/8/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..195975f --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/8/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,95 @@ +# Episode 8 Outline +## Act 1 +While Max and Airiona is in cyberspace + +Max: what was that + +Airiona: are you watching the Championships + +Max: no of course not + +*he hears another sound maybe a yell* + +Max: what the heck sorry have to go + +Airiona: you are. You're only cheating your self Max! if you leave now... + +Max goes outside and finds a crater with an injured Minia + +Max: hey are you ok + +## Act 2 +Max: oh no she needs help she'll be dead in a matter of minutes if she cant regenerate + + +### Panel +Airiona inspects her CSD + + Airiona: Already/Really. It usually takes hours to fix these things + +Max: They won't be able to fix it fast enough + +Minia is sleep and bandaged with nothing on but her sleeves and pants over her black tights which is slightly torn +Max is repairing her CSD when she wakes up + +Minia:(she feels her back and head) Where am I Where, Where is my Cyber.Beast + +Max: I found you outside of my house and your Cyber.Beast was broken so I'm fixing it + +Max: So your My Nia? + +Minia:(smiling) it’s Minia + +Max: Myy Nia + +Minia:(scowling with head tilted to the right)Nooo, Mih nee ah. + +Max: nope I found you so know your My Nia + +Minia:(she laughs/giggles loudly and rolls eyes with head up transitioning from scowling) ok fine + +Torrey Max's CSD makes witty comment about him bring Minia in. + +Torrey: You know you're the second girl he has brought this month + +Minia: Really?... wait a minute did it just talk on it's own. CSD/Cyber.Beast normally don't talk without prompt, let alone hold a conversation. + +Max: I customized Her name is Torrey + + +Max asks why Minia's her is red despite her being a green and blue type cybervator + +Max: You are a blue and green cybervator but your hair is red how is that possible + +Minia: oh this that well I was a born a green and blue type but when I got older they tried to edit my green genes(CRISPR) to be red mostly so that I could be a a red blue Xybrid and maybe even red green and blue. unfortunately it didn't work out and instead I just ended up with the red hair that would turn Green when ever I go into BurstDrive + +Max: Why not make you red and blue from beginning + +Minia: They tried that with harmony she became Insane from the emotional instability the red and green genes created they figured the added red genes on top of the green types ability to tame Cyber.Beast would prevent me from from being berserk I end up quite the opposite + +Minia: I Know you probably think it's weird + +Max: No I actually thought it was pretty cool. + +Minia asks about his talking Cyber.Beast + +## Act 3 +Jax comes to get Minia + +Jax(hugging Minia and maybe crying): I thought you were dead + +Minia/Jax insist that he does not tell anyone because if word gets out she will be in trouble + +Max has a look of surprise that Jax is not as tuff as he thought + +Max is uncomfortable by the sight of Jax crying. He intentionally disrupts the mood. + +Max: Hey Jax + +Max tells Jax that he will get get stronger and next time they meet rather in cyberspace or the championships to not expect the same result as last time + +Jax holds back wipes his tears. scowls with confusion and laughs. + +Jax: Lets go Minia + +After Minia leaves something is seen in the hole Minia left in the ground. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/9/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/9/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..63a8dfd --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/9/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,7 @@ +# Episode 9 Outline +## Act 1 +Max has another match in cyberspace +## Act 2 +Max wins his first match +## Act 3 +Max gives upwards of 70% his earnings for UBI which Airiona/Akia/Spike is confused by \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/comic/makkusu/readme.md b/comic/makkusu/readme.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..e6ace97 --- /dev/null +++ b/comic/makkusu/readme.md @@ -0,0 +1,407 @@ +# Cyber.Beast(Max) outline +## Theme +**The role sports play in society** +*subtheme: competition vs cooperation* + +## Brainstorm +- Episodes: 22-27 +- Roles + - Broadcaster/Commentator: Spike, Max? + - Fan: Max + - Cybervator: Minia, Jax, Airiona, Xenos, Ace, Harmony + - Chief: Kyshumu, Alex + + +- Max's altruism becomes contagious and eventually becomes the basis for the Cyvolters identity at this point Max either accepts or realize that he is a Cyvolter or she is shown helping another cyvolter + + - Max or someone that max helps someone or max saying its is solely for the purpose making him a stronger opponent strong enough to be a challenge for him in the future + + - Someone joins forces with Max because they want the chance to fight someone even stronger than that protagonist in hopes of climbing up in ranking + + - Minia learns that her mother is Torrey around the same time Max tells her his mother is torrey or learns that his mother is torrey or vice versa + + - Speeding Bullet is discovered to be Airiona during the tournament a fight ensues between Airiona and Kyshumu. Airiona is defeated Kyshumu. + + Harmony is enraged by this and charges in to attack Kyshumu. Kyshumu thinks she is trying to help him and tells her to stand down that he has everything in control Avis realizes that she is not going after Airiona but rather Kyshumu he tells her to stop and jumps in front with his arms open. She barely moves her hand out of the way but it is not enough as the energy from the hand is enough to obliterate the left side of his head. She apologizes saying that she tried to stop or avoid him but could not. + + This makes things worst as she goes berserk and Kyshumu and Xenos must work together Harmony to stop her. + + +## Act 1 +### 1. Ordinary World +Episodes: [1](https://github.com/Sheldon-Lloyd/Cyber.Beast/tree/Cyber.Beast(Max)/comic/Max/episode-1) +- Max watches Championships + + - **Xenos loses the Championships** + **Shown as an early flash back:** + After Xenos loses and Max who is fan of him runs up to him(maybe a younger Max) and says I don't like you any more. + + +### 2. Call To Adventure +Episodes: [2](https://github.com/Sheldon-Lloyd/Cyber.Beast/tree/Cyber.Beast(Max)/comic/Max/episode-2), [3](https://github.com/Sheldon-Lloyd/Cyber.Beast/tree/Cyber.Beast(Max)/comic/Max/episode-3) + - Max Applies to be a Cybervator + - Max heads back home + - Airiona is seen escaping the hub Max was at + - When Max arrives home an injured Airiona is found at the foot of his door + +- The reader sees the inside of Max’s room which has posters and cybervator Fandom items everywhere +- Max uses this opportunity to test his Cyber.Beast controller using Airiona's Cyber.Beast + +- S/He talks about how citizens can’t become cybervators because they don't a tail which means they can synergize. With the device he made anyone will be able to use a Cyber.Beast in cyberspace even though they still won’t be able to become cybervators since they still won’t be able to go into BurstDrive + +- Max tends to the injured Airiona fixing her CSD which allows her to heal. she encourages him to try again and that she will give word to her superiors to give him a chance and that they will send him a Cyber.Beast so that he can test his device. + +### 3. Refusal Of The Call +Episodes: [4](https://github.com/Sheldon-Lloyd/Cyber.Beast/tree/Cyber.Beast(Max)/comic/Max/episode-4) + + +- Max is given a Cyber.Beast and invited to be a cybervator + - Max takes the cyber.beast given to him by Xenos/Airiona inviting him to join the Cyvolters which he in excitement misread as cybervators + - Airiona sends the invite to which Xenos scolds her because he wanted to trick him into joining. As he know he would never join knowing that it is the Cyvolters. + - The first person he tells is Spike + +- Max teams up with Airiona in cyberspace. + - When Max logs into cyberspace it is recommended that he choose an alias in which he chooses Max + - Max is about to mine cyber.beast or fight another cybervator alone He spots a girl that waves at him but he doesn't know who she is so he he casually ignores her + + Later he gets into some trouble and is saved by her. As she pick him up and carries him out of harm's way + + Girl: She says hi again + + Max: wait aren't you(showing image of her waving) + + Girl: Yep I knew you were a cyvolter the moment I saw you. It would be a disgrace if I didn't -- my cyber.beast is a bear/shark after all. Us cyvolter have to stick together ya know + + Max: wait so you know who each AND EVERY cyvolter is + + Girl: Don’t woorry I won't tell + +### 4. Meeting The Mentor +Episodes: 5 + +Airiona gets back in contact with Max and explains what they are about. Max decides to join as he does not want to tell Spike the truth knowing that he will try to capitalize on this info by broadcasting it. + +## Act 2 +### 5. Crossing The Threshold +Episodes: 6, 7 + +- Max and maybe Airiona lose their first ranked/unranked fight and prepare for a second. They lose to Jax who does not let up and Jax nearly takes his only cyber.beast. Max ejects just in time An announcer is either surprised that he even has a fan and laughs at the fact the he only has one fan probably because ever saw his first fight in which he did terrible. Spike is that only fan +- Spike wanted him to join his company which is secretly helping the Cyvolter organization. + +- Max takes the criticisms of Spike and improves the controller he made + +- Max develops Airiona's character as he gets her to not only help other citizens in cyberspace but Cybervators as well. + + They help them mostly by teaming up with ReNet, BluNet, and Cyvolter Cybervators that are being out numbered + + +- Max trained his body + + Expecting to be in the tournament he trained his body and ignores his doubters + +- The 22?.3 championships is going on + + The announcer talks about how team Miniajax has not won a championship match since becoming a Cybervator and that she is a disappointment as a Xybrid Cybervator and will likely lose against Ace and Alex who might be retiring after this fight as he might become the next BluNet chief. + + The satellite in which Minia and Jax is fighting on malfunctions causing Minia to fall back down to earth + +### 6. Tests, Allies, Enemies +Episodes: 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 + +- Max has customized his Cyber.Beast and CSD to have a talking Ai which he calls Torrey + +- Mini falls in the backyard of Max + + Max goes to call for help but remembers that Airiona says that it takes hours to fix CSDs. And that if he does not fix it soon she might never recover or worse dies. + + After Minia wakes up she ask why he did not call for help. He says that once help arrived that there is no way they will let him repair it. Tells him that being a Xybrid she has two CSDs + +- Max tells a worried Spike what happen + + it is placed on the news Minia teleports to Max enraged that he told. He is seen taking a shower and is wearing his headband/glasses Minia asks him why he wears even while in the shower. He tells her that it is a keepsake from his parents that he doesn't want to lose. He tells her their names where Torrey and Mack. + +- The Cyvolters are teased as a mysterious group of Cybervators that has been capturing/stealing the satellites the house Cyber.Beast. It is revealed to be something that has been going on for a while now. + + It turns out that the reason the satellite Minia was fighting on malfunctioned causing her to fall was because the Cyvolters had tampered with it it. This is something that may have been known by the NRA/CyberOps for a while but hidden from the public as they did not know which Satellite was tampered with or what had been done. + +- Max helps someone in cyberspace + + he has develop a reputation for being an altruistic cybervator not just help others but in terms of giving money unlike other cybervators he gives 70% or more of his earnings to fans +- Max looks ahead to see who his team may be if he earns a spot + +- Max loses to Jax + + This team consists of Minia and Jax + +- Max is seen outside of cyberspace + + Max has not been seen out side of cyberspace for a while but when we see him he now has hair on his head and no longer has a fat belly. + +- Now having a Cyber.Beast Max has customized his CSD to have a hologram of a bird(owl?) + +- Max learns that Airiona is a cyvolter and he may have been helped them +### 7. Approach To The Inmost Cave +Episodes: 13, 14, 15 + +- More citizens are now competing in the CNS league thanks to the Cyvolters distributing the tech that Max made + +- Max finds old cyber.tech + + Max realizes that even if he makes it into the tournament he won't be of much help since he can't go into a BurstDrive mode. + + He finds a hole in the ground left by Minia in it is old cyber.tech this is just what he needs to compete on even grounds (exposition opportunity): + + Earlier in the Cyber world history they used robots and somewhat bulky exosuits they even had space ships. this technology was lost after cybervators took over. Many would say that it halted their growth as Cybervator instead relied on cyber tech + + What he learns contradicts common knowledge as history has be rewritten + + - History is written by the losers as they write the history they are able to shape the perceived realty of their victors the future generation that sees this history will judge their current leaders based on the past villain like winners and the reasons the current system is place by this and will rise and over throw them or even an outside party may take them down based on this history much like the Mongols (http://scholars-stage.blogspot.com/2016/11/history-is-written-by-losers.html) + +- Minia helps Max who is bullied + Max is watching a CNS broadcast while at the gym and is wearing headphones maybe visor headphones + + Max uses his UBI credit to become the sponsor of the cheapest cybervator he could find. Akia/Spike tells him he spent more money than he can make in a year as he buys majority of her stock shares in credit. He does not know how much money he has made as a cybervator an maybe doesn't even know he is a cybervator. + + + + Max is getting bullied first they verbally abuse him. Akia tells haha look at Max trying to get buff you think that just because you are getting in shape you will become a cybervator. lets see what you got. They then begin pushing him at this point the alert system on his CSD turns yellow or orange at which point the CSD says the threat level and ask Max if he would like assistance he says no. one of the bullies Akia his it turned orange/yellow the leader then says don't worry the Cybervators will only come if it turns red or Max asks for help which he says would never happen. + + It appears like he might stand up for his self but he doesn't. Just as Max is pushed or about to be pushed to the ground Minia appears the bullies run away. After they run away Max ask what are you doing here and she's say I'm your Nia remember. Minia asks Max if he is alright to which he replies that he is fine and that they are just bullies and tells her thanks but that he didn't need her help and that it never reached level red and she says she just happened to notice it rising and decided to intervene on her own “and besides I was bored anyway” + +- Max might not have enough points +- Someone he helped before allows him to compete + + The person either resigns or give him the fight that he needs to be ranked high enough to joins as they don't need them (thunora?) + +- Max is laughed at by a broadcaster maybe Akia for the fact that he may have managed to become a highly ranked Cybervator but does not have an Tail let alone his missing arm and leg(s) so even if he makes it to the championship how does he expect to doing anything with out being able to go into burst drive mode. + +- Max loses a match and with it his cyber.beast which pretty much eliminates any chances of making it into the championships + +- Alex becomes chief +- Max works on his new tech + + +### 8. Ordeal +Episodes: 16 +- Max is given/finds a new cyber.beast or the one he beats gives him his Cyber.Beast back as they know how much he helped others and wants to return the favor. + + The only problem is that he is almost out of time and no one would consider risking a match this late in the running. And he needs to face a top 3/5 cybervator to have any hope + + Jax however gives him that match after Minia pleads him citing him saving her. He agrees but tells her but dont expect me to let him win. She says she would never ask that of him. + + Jax and Max fights which is watch by none/many as no one expect a match at this time. + + Max fairs well but time is running out. At this point Jax forfeits knowing that he has a huge lead as the number one ranked cybervator. + + Jax: Don't get any ideas I'm just paying back the favor. + + *Flash back of Jax shown hugging Minia after Max saved her* + + Minia is surprised that he knew there was not much time left as he normal has a bad concept of time. He tells her Max but he never said anything out loud + +- Someone asks if he is Upset that he was handed the spot rather than earning it on the team Max tell Alex/Xenos/Minia/Jax/Akia/Airiona that it does matter that it is just a game. They reply telling him that is his problem/Thats why I can stand you/Its not just a game + + Max is told that it is not just a game but that it the reason that we have no more wars and maintain peace among citizens as it gives people a place to belong satisfying the human desire for tribalism + + +- The NRA are against allowing citizens to participate in the CNS using unsanctioned Cyber.Beast distributed by the Cyvolters. They hold a meeting to discuss this with the CNS. The CNS tells them that is not their place to be decide rather someone should legally be allowed to compete. + +- Not only does the CNS ignore their complaints officially recognize the Cyvolters allowing citizens to compete in the league. But because they don't have a hub the can't compete in the championships. Their reasoning is that the primary mission of the CNS is to distribute wealth among the citizens and this furthers that agenda. + + All of the citizen who has become cybervators up until now to prevent this citizens will be allowed to join the CNS. this is done to prevent them from joining the cybervators just so that they can join the CNS. + +- Adding insult to injury the CNS request that both ReNet and BluNet gives up one hub to the Cyvolters so they can compete. This angers Kyshumu who yells that citizens shouldn't compete he threatens to pull ReNet out of the CNS + + He suggest that it is too dangerous and not having armor they are more likely to be killed and that they can't regrow limbs like a real cybervator + + + +### 9. Reward (Seizing The Sword) +Episodes: 17 + +- Alex has been newly elected as the Chief of BluNet + +- Alex tells the NRA that both Citizens and Cybervators has taken a liking to Max and that their no telling how they might respond if they don't let him compete. They discuss the possibility of angering the citizens if they don't let him compete citing the decrease in ReNet stock as an example. + +- Alex allows Max to compete with BluNet or offers up Kassiea/Xenos' hub allowing Max to compete + +- Minia is traded to BluNet by Leona which is all over the news. + - Minia would've been starting over Leona had she not been traded. + - Kyshumu is enraged as this is right before the hub she is traded to becomes a Cyvolter hub. He then realizes this is the perfect opportunity to ensure Max loses -- he tells her to throw the match. This leaves Minia conflicted because she does not want to see Max fail. + +- Max uses his tech to compete in the CNS championships + + Airiona: Wow I thought what you made before was incredible how did you create this stuff + + Max: I didn't make it. Its I made from tech that I found under my house(the hole Minia/Airiona created). A lot of it was unfinished All I did was make a few modifications + + Max: I call it an Elimiter. Normally a cyber.beast would be able to synergize with a cybervator thanks to thier tail. Since everybody including cybervators evolved from plants I used a plant to act as the cyber.beast[1](https://www.engadget.com/2018/12/05/mit-researchers-create-a-robot-houseplant-that-moves-on-its-own/),[2]( https://www.theverge.com/2018/7/12/17563688/robot-plant-hybrid-hexa-vincross-succulent ). + + :so you are basically sending commands to a berserk cyber.beast like a green/black cybervator. So it basically makes you like a Xybrid. + other.person: what how. + + Max: < Well you see I can also hyperlink with other cybervator see what they are thinking and send commands as well. > + + other.person: you just hyperlinked to me with out a fist bump. + + Max: no I did, during the fight(getting blood) / I did it using the right vibration frequency + + Airiona: This must be the(tech lost to time) lost technology from thousands of years ago Xenos was telling. Haha who Cybervators really are a ~~cancer~~(find new word) to the world + +- Max's team is formed + + | Position | First | Second | Third | Fourth | + |----------|---------|--------------|-------|--------| + | Red | Harmony | Aarock | | | + | Green | Airiona | Max | | | + | Blue | Minia | Xenos | | | + | Black | Knilla | Avis | | | + | White | Ace | Avis/Max | | | + +- Jax's team + + | Position | First | Second | Third | Fourth | + |----------|---------|--------------|-------|--------| + | Red | Jax | | | | + | Green | Leona | Tomasina | | | + | Blue | Leona? | | | | + | Black | Jax | | | | + | White | Thunora | | | | + +- Harmony attacks Max who tries to introduce his self a nearly kills him but she stops which surprises Ace + +When Airiona and Minia take off their cloaks leaving their one piece backless outfit their scar can be compared by the reader + +Airiona has had multiple wounds to her body most gained through her training to become a Cybervator fighting until all of her energy has been depleted in order to climb the ranks as quickly as possible, unlike the pristine MiNia who had everything handed to her who will quit at the halfway mark of her energy level. + +After seeing both seeing the backs of both Airiona and Minia Max looks confused Xenos sees him looking maybe makes a quip then proceeds to explain the reason that Aironia has so many scars compared to Everyone else and why Minia has none + +Airiona's flashback shows parents yell at the kids encouraging to beat up the other kids “Get him, come on!" + +### 10. The Road Back +Episodes: 18, 19 + +- Max is fighting on Akia's favorite Cybervators team + + Max runs into Akia before his championship match. + + Akia: Hey Max(She looks as if she will punch/hit him) + + AKia(She has her hand/fist on his shoulder): Xenos is my favorite Cybervator/Every one is count on you so don't lose/Mess up. + +- An ultimatum/wager is purposed for Max + + With Max joining ReNet Kyshumu tells the CNS/NRA that no Citizen should be allowed to compete in the CNS. + + The CNS' Yaharia makes a ultimatum suggesting that a citizen is unlikely to win the championships--If Max loses no Citizen will be allowed to compete in the CNS again. + + Kyshumu(angry):Fine! + + :and if he wins + + Alex is about to say something + + Kyshumu(interrupts): He won't. I'll make sure of it. + + : With all due respect sir you can't compete in the championships any more you're the chief. + + Kyhsumu: I know that I can't but my wife can + + :She's been retired for years!? +- Championship commentary + + **Panel 1:** + This years class of cybervators displayed their breathtaking speed, backbreaking/bone crushing strength and unique abilities that defy belief. This is the moment when cybervators gets the opportunity to fulfill their hopes and their family dreams. + + **Panel 2:** + And as they prepare to take this stage they will follow in the the footsteps of so many cybervators, + + **Panel 3:** + some of which stepped into greatness(Kyshumu) the moment they became cybervators + + **Panel 4:** + others grew into their greatness(Xenos). + +- Xenos gets injured and gets a limb or two cut off and Avis is missing + - During the match it appears that Minia is doing just what her father wanted(throwing the match) as she performs poorly during her match. It turns out that this is not the case. She has been trying her best but does she not want to hurt her opponent hampering her abilities. + - Airiona tells Max that Minia is sabotaging them. Max(he was voted team captain despite not starting) then suggests that Minia be removed from her Blue position. Airiona is happy thinking Minia is being bench--however Max bench's Airiona instead who is visibly upset. Someone asks then who will take the Blue/White position (Harmony(can't)/Xenos(injured)/Avis (missing)). + + Max: well then I guess Air... + + Xenos: You should Max. It will be the perfect chance to show everyone what you're capable of. + + Airiona: are you crazy he doesn't have a BurstDrive he'll get his self killed + + Max: Actually! He might be a genius. You see Jax is a lot like Minia and the last person on that team that would kill anyone. There is no telling how much he will hold back against a Citizen like me. But what I do know is that his biggest weakness will become our strength. + + - After Max is substituted in + + Tomasina:We have huge lead there is now way they will make a comeback. So don’t go all out although he thinks he’s a Cybervator he’s still a citizen + + Jax: ya ya ya I know one wrong move and I could kill him. Don’t worry I got this. + + + - They begin to make/orchestrate a historic comeback but their efforts fall short as the deficit Minia creating was to great to overcome + + - Yaharia takes notice of Max as she realizes that he is using ancient tech that was locked up and hidden centuries ago +## Act 3 +### 11. Resurrection +Episodes: 20, 21 +- Max fights Jax + - Max suggests a line up change. + + When Minia subs for Xenos max is able to read her mind. He learns that the reason she doesn't do well as a blue style fighter is not lack of skill and imagination but rather a matter of mind set. + + To keep up with traditions started by the war blue Cybervators fight along with white cybervator on offense and Red along with black as this was the best way at the time to get these 4 nations to work together on the same team. This eventually becomes an unwritten rule that is mistaken as a rule. Max, however, knows this and employs Knilla to be his support fighter rather than Ace this way they can do the move ace and knilla is known for. When max tells them his plan the reject it at first citing the unwritten rule. Max convince them otherwise. Ace tries to convince knilla to do it while max takes his clothes off to fight. She reiterated that she will only let ma... Ace ride her. Ace says forget it I will be your support we will just have come up with another plan. Max tells him that it is too late he has already submitted the lineup for the round. Max particularly needs her to be his shield since he does not have one + + Minia thinks to much particularly the well being of her opponent and is too passive when fighting + Mina is changed from the blue to the green position + + Harmony goes from red to blue after being calmed or Xenos take Blue +### 12. Return With The Elixir +Episodes: 22 +running circles around Max does a spend being slower this gives him more mobility allowing ace to shot and score. he tries a second time thinking he has the upper hand but Jax is ready for it + +Max acts as if he will slide under Jax who punches the ground breaking it sending debris upwards which Max rides the debris allowing him to dos an aerial attack. + +- Knilla allow Max to ride after Ace cites what she said earlier + Knilla start running and says Max(who turns around)! jump on. + + Max takes he lance as she runs through Jax Max opens the barrier and they are able to collect points + + Max ride Knilla again this time he jumps with her lance off hoping the momentum from Jax giving chase would create an opening. However he is shot at instead. The cybervator shots only at his feet but this enough to send a citizen like him flying backwards. + + Max starts to question why everyone is afraid to hit him. he then questions why he himself is upset by this as it was the plan after all. He states he can once again take advantage of the debris created by the blast. + + using the cover from the debris he closes while typing telling Ace/Minia when and where to fire/attack at in creating an opening allowing Minia/Ace to get points + +- Max uses his trump card utilizing the energy bean he ate earlier this allows him to partially synergize with the cost of depleting all of his energy with the risk of killing him. + + + + + + +- In the final seconds of the match amidst a comeback + + Max: + + Max: Jax! Don’t hold back/Give it all you got/Stop holding back + + Jax: < he's right if I lose now Max won't be the only citizen who’s life will be at risk > + + Max: why did I say that I have to win + so that everyone will have the right compete + I am fighting so that all citizens will have the right to compete + + Max: is it from the Cyber.Beast. No that's not it this feeling--this is what it means to truly compete/be a cybervator + + +- Max wins/loses(do to the unforeseen random nature of Jax) championship + + If Max wins it is because Tomasina lets him or is distracted by the fact that he looks/feels familiar + +- Xenos retires from the CNS league + +- Cyvolters intentions are revealed +- The CNS is shut down? diff --git a/comic/miniajax/readme.md b/comic/miniajax/readme.md deleted file mode 100644 index e6b4bc9..0000000 --- a/comic/miniajax/readme.md +++ /dev/null @@ -1,97 +0,0 @@ -# Cyber.Beast(miniajax) outline -## Brainstorm - -- Roles - - Broadcaster/Commentator : Spike, Makkusu? - - Handlers/Cornerman/crew: Makkusu? - - Fan: Makkusu - - Cybervator: Minia, Jax - - **CyberOps** - does that dirty work that no one else could or would do to maintain the world order. Missions are assigned in level dependent on how much they are trust. - - level 1: Throwing matches to maximse profits and maintain perceived competitiveness to keep fans happy and to make sure weaelth is properly destributed - - level 2: Cheating also to maximse profits and maintain perceived competitiveness - - level 3: Killing Cyber.Beast knowing that which are former cybervators - - level 4: killing cybervators/citizens that may disrupt order (only 12 cybervators are at this level at one time) - - Xenos however does the opposite and chooses cybervators that will hesitate to complete these missions whivh is why Minia and not Jax is selected to join the CyberOps. - - Cyvolters - - - -- Minia joins the cyvolters after Kyshumu kills Avis and uses the name Airiona - -- Minia Joins the Cyvolters replacing Avis - -- Jax and Minia fight in space sending Minia crashing on Makkusu's appartment - -- Minia learns that the Cyber.Beast she is assigned to kill are former Cybervators and learning so is a test of her loyalty/trustworthyness - -- Makkusu goes from being a fan to cyberops handler for minia/Makkusu becomes the first citzen to a handler for a cybervator in the CNS - -- Minia discovers who eclipse is or reveals that she already knows - -## Act 1 - -- Leona selects Jax to join her Kyshumu is angry that she didn't invite her own sister - -- Leona Invites Minia to join the CyberOps Kyshumu is angry that she didn't invite her own fiance -### 1. Ordinary World -- Minia is hated among cybervators no one would team up with her even her own sister as it seems that she only cares about making money and nothing more. Jax is the only one that excepts and decides to work with her - -### 2. Call To Adventure -### 3. Refusal Of The Call -- Minia initially rejects the CyberOps and wants to focus on earning money for her family but finds a far more enticing goal upon learning the Cyvolters are looking to change the world in favor of citizens -### 4. Meeting The Mentor -- Minia Teams up with Xenos in the CNS and is given the code name Airiona as a Cyvolter - -## Act 2 - -### 5. Crossing The Threshold -- Minia attempts to fight a Cyber.Beast in space stealing Avis' Cyber.Beast to do so -### 6. Tests, Allies, Enemies -- After falling on the appartment of Makkusu she becomes his personal cybervator steping in to protect him from his bully Akia dispite enforcement being unecessary - -- Makkusu recognizes Minia - - Makkusu: hey arent you the Cybervator everyone calls Meania you don't seem all that mean - - Minia(yelling): It's Minia I hate that name - - Makkusu: ha ha ha. Ok - -- Upon Minia leaving - Makkusu: See ya later Minia - - Minia:(scowlling) it’s Minia - - Makkusu: Myy Nia - - Minia:(scowling with head tilted to the right)Nooo, Mih nee ah. - - Makkusu: nope I found you so know your My Nia - - Minia:(she laughs/giggles loudly and rolls eyes with head up transitioning from scowling) ok fine - - Xenos(half smiling): well, It's better than Meania - - Minia: hey! I told you not to call me that - - Minia: weeell that's beacuse you're [special/different] - - Makkusu: how so? - - Minia: -### 7. Approach To The Inmost Cave -- Minia suggests enlisting Makkusu as a cyvolter -### 8. Ordeal -Avis is accused of being a cyvolter and is killed by Kyshumu -### 9. Reward (Seizing The Sword) -Minia is Given Avis' Cyber.Beast and replaces him -## Act 3 -### 10. The Road Back -### 11. Resurrection -### 12. Return With The Elixir