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L9-L14: apply Tier 3 (LOW polish) adversarial review fixes
Wording polish, numerical precision tweaks, citation consistency, and
BibTeX hygiene across all six lectures, applied by 7 parallel agents
(one per lecture plus one cross-cutting BibTeX agent). All HIGH and
MEDIUM items already addressed in commits 8334c4e (Tier 1) and
6acaa0a (Tier 2). This batch picks up the LOW tail.
L9 Earth & Venus (+14 words):
- Standardised four occurrences of `0.72 AU` to `0.723 AU` for Venus
orbital distance consistency with line 221
- Two rhetorical questions in opening + one at line 789 converted to
declaratives (against Tim's global style guide for prose)
- Triple point precision: `273 K` -> `273.16 K` with rounded value
annotation downstream
L10 Mercury & Mars (+59 words):
- "Well within the habitable zone" softened to "near the outer edge
of the conservative habitable zone" (overstatement caught by L10
review)
- Mars rotation period format consistency: harmonised "24h 37min"
and "$24$ hours and $37$ minutes" to a single `$24$ h $37$ min`
form across the lecture; same for Phobos `$7$ h $39$ min`
- Jeans escape "checking the limits" factor: 150 corrected to 81;
the (1+lambda) prefactor that the original draft ignored makes
the actual ratio (6/11) e^5 ~ 81, not the bare e^5 ~ 148
- Added the implicit (1/(2 sqrt pi)) prefactor commentary on the
high-lambda asymptotic Jeans flux form
- Split the dense intro paragraph at "Part 3 then steps back" for
pacing
L11 Gas & Ice Giants (+82 words):
- Kronoseismology etymology added at L278 (Kronos = Greek name for
Saturn, in analogy with helio- and asteroseismology)
- Mankovich 2021 Saturn heavy-element estimate tightened from
"17-20 M_Earth" to "~17 M_Earth" to match the maximum-likelihood
result
- Cowling's anti-dynamo theorem now defined in-line at L295 with a
one-sentence explanation that purely axisymmetric flow cannot
sustain a magnetic field, plus a soft pointer to L4 for the basic
dynamo concept
- Saturn ring mass: "comparable to Mimas" -> "about 40% of Mimas"
matching Iess 2019
- Triton retrograde clarification: added parenthetical noting the
obliquity is ~23 degrees relative to the equator-normal
- DePater 2022 citation now attached only to the Uranus observations
where it actually applies; the Neptune JWST imaging is described
in a separate clause without that misattributed citation
- Saturn dilute-vs-diffuse heavy-element terminology standardised
to "dilute" throughout (was inconsistent body/Summary)
L12 Small Bodies (+1 word):
- Rubin "mid-2025" -> "June 2025" for date precision
- Grammar fix at line 626: "expected to roughly an order of
magnitude increase the discovery rate of NEAs" -> "expected to
increase the discovery rate of NEAs by roughly an order of
magnitude" (this was flagged as MEDIUM in the L12 review but had
not actually been patched in commit 6acaa0a; agent caught the
gap)
- Unicode normalisation: `Widmanst{"a}tten` -> `Widmanstaetten`
(x2), `Pach{'o}n` -> `Pachon`
L13 Exoplanets (+5 words):
- Jupiter transit depth corrected from R_J/R_sun = 0.103, delta ~
1.06% to 0.1005, delta ~ 1.01%, with parenthetical noting the
round 1% pedagogical value
- Figure label `fig:weisssspacing` (triple-s typo) renamed to
`fig:weiss_spacing`
- Figure label `fig:winnmassradius` renamed to `fig:ck17massradius`
to reflect the actual ChenKipping2017 source after the cleanup
pass relabelled it
L14 Synthesis (+6 words):
- Two nested-paren citations at lines 229 and 240 converted from
`({ref}lecture09, {cite:p}Hamano2013)` to `(... ; {cite:t}
Hamano2013)` to prevent rendered double-paren `(Lecture 9,
(Hamano 2013))`
- F9 PLATO verb tense: "is being measured by Kepler, TESS, and
PLATO" -> "has been measured by Kepler and TESS and will be
sharpened by PLATO" since PLATO has not yet launched
book/references.bib (18 modifications, 0 add/delete; total 384):
- Added `eprint` arxiv ID and ADS URL fields to: Wahl2017,
FortneyNettelmann2010, Greene2023, Bryson2021, Lichtenberg2021,
Wordsworth2022, Howell2020, Pollack1996, Acuna1999, Lederberg1965,
Mojzsis1996, Dodd2017, Russell2014, Sasselov2020, NAS2022,
Drake1965, Connerney2022, Peale1979
- All new arxiv IDs were verified by the BibTeX agent against ADS
via WebFetch — none are invented
- In-file comment markers added next to Peale1979 (duplicate of
Peale1979gas) and NealMRS2022 (mislabel: Meyer is actual first
author) flagging them for a future coordinated bib+lecture pass
Aggregate state after Tier 3:
- Master references.bib: 384 entries (no count change, hygiene only)
- All 351 unique citations across L9-L14 resolve cleanly
- All 222 figure references resolve
- Zero em-dashes anywhere in L9-L14 prose
- All blackboard derivations untouched
- All Tier 2 equation density additions intact
- All locked content preserved (Pluto in L12, Kruijer2017 PNAS,
NC-CC three-way treatment, K2-18 b case study framing, Drake
critical with Sandberg posterior, Venus phosphine sceptical,
water-delivery planetary-evolution framing, Wordsworth coupling
diagram, max 2 figures per source paper, degree symbols, etc.)
Deferred items (not blockers, batched for future cleanup):
- Peale1979 / Peale1979gas duplicate consolidation (requires editing
the L11 .md file to switch its citation to the canonical key)
- Howell2020 / HowellPappalardo2020 duplicate consolidation (L14
citation update needed)
- NealMRS2022 -> Meyer2022MSR rename (L14 citation update needed)
- L12 McKinnon2008 ACM abstract -> peer-reviewed Castillo-Rogez 2019
or similar (requires lecture text change)
- L9 Ivanov & Head 2015 / Abe & Matsui 1988 captions: convert plain-
text mentions to {cite:t} or remove (requires both new bib entries
and lecture edits)
- L10 missing historical citations: Pettengill & Dyce 1965, Peale
1969, Harmon & Slade 1992, Webster 2015, Korablev 2019 (each
requires both a new bib entry and a citation insertion in L10)
- L11 Lainey 2024 Mimas subsurface ocean (not currently cited)
Tier 3 of the priority plan is now complete. All three tiers (mechanical
rendering bugs, substantive equation density and content fixes, LOW
polish and BibTeX hygiene) have been processed. The L9-L14 lecture notes
track is now in publishable shape modulo the small list of deferred
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