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L9-L14: apply Tier 1 (mechanical) adversarial review fixes
All ship-blocker rendering and factual bugs flagged by the 2nd
adversarial review pass. None of these are judgment calls; they are
mechanical corrections that prevent broken HTML/LaTeX output or
remove factual contradictions.
L9 Earth & Venus:
- Replace undefined `\venus` math macro at line 527 with
`\mathrm{Venus}` (would have caused MathJax error in HTML and
likely broken XeLaTeX compilation)
- Replace `{\bf Venus}` and `{\bf Earth}` LaTeX syntax in figure
captions at lines 23 and 286 with the MyST-native `**Venus**`
and `**Earth**` form (LaTeX `{\bf}` does not render in MyST)
L11 Gas & Ice Giants:
- Fix Saturn-vs-Neptune wind-speed contradiction at line 314.
Previously claimed Saturn's equatorial jet "is the fastest in the
solar system" at ~400 m/s, contradicting lines 669 and 782 which
correctly say Neptune's ~580 m/s retrograde flow is the fastest.
Reworded to "one of the fastest" with a forward reference to the
Neptune section in Part 2.
- Fix `Bolton2017` misattribution at line 78. Bolton 2017 is the
Juno first-results paper; the 1995 Galileo probe entry-site
composition result is from Niemann et al. 1998 JGR. Added
Niemann1998 to references.bib and updated the citation. Also
tightened the prose to "Galileo probe mass spectrometer
measurements" to match the source paper title.
- Drop a stray escaped apostrophe `Saturn\'s` at line 317 (rendered
literally; should be `Saturn's`)
L12 Small Bodies:
- Drop the broken L13 forward reference at line 1197. L12 previously
promised that interstellar visitors would be "the link between the
small-body science of this lecture and the exoplanet content of
L13 and L14", but neither L13 nor L14 actually contain ISO content.
Reworded to "the conceptual link... a complement to the
remote-sensing approaches developed in L13" which is true.
L13 Exoplanets:
- Global chemistry style pass: 84 bare-subscript chemical formulae
converted to the project-mandated `\mathrm{}` form. L9 has 88
`\mathrm{}` wrappings and L5 has 45; L13 had zero, in violation
of the documented project convention. Examples: `H$_2$O` ->
`$\mathrm{H_2O}$`, `CO$_2$` -> `$\mathrm{CO_2}$`, `H$_2$/He` ->
`$\mathrm{H_2}$/He`, `H$_2$-rich` -> `$\mathrm{H_2}$-rich`,
`(H$_2$, N$_2$,` -> `($\mathrm{H_2}$, $\mathrm{N_2}$,` etc.
Affects ~50 distinct prose locations across Parts 1-3.
L14 Synthesis:
- Fix LaTeX-escape rendering bugs at 6 locations. `e.g.\ ` and
`et al.\ ` (LaTeX spacing) would render literally in MyST as
"e.g.\ " and "et al.\ " with the visible backslash. Replaced
with regular space. Also fixed `Wolf \& Toon 2014` and
`Ment\&Charbonneau23` which would render the backslash literally
or break entity escaping; replaced with plain `&`.
References inventory after this batch: 384 unique BibTeX keys (was
383, +Niemann1998). All 350 unique citations across L9-L14 still
resolve cleanly. All 222 figure references still resolve to on-disk
files. Zero em-dashes anywhere in L9-L14 prose.
Tier 1 of the priority plan is now complete. Tier 2 (substantive
equation-density additions, L10 Olympus Mons height, L10 L4
cross-reference fix, L12 Bizzarro/Connelly/Johansen attribution)
deferred to a separate batched pass after Tim's input.1 parent 36925eb commit 8334c4e
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